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#11 Mrs Pantherfan

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 09:07 AM

your legs are whiter than mine! :)

#12 Wither

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 08:40 PM

Next thing you know you will have the FBI at your door.







...again.

#13 d-run

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 09:24 PM

I thought it was good. I enjoy your posts on here and I think you will do a good job writing. Just as constructive criticism, I felt the intro was a little forced. Probably would have lost me if I didn't know you from here.

#14 Guest_Irv_*

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:28 PM

best case scenario: people will actually read it

worst case scenario: this will be your last blog post

#15 Floppin

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Posted 20 June 2012 - 05:31 AM

I thought it was good. I enjoy your posts on here and I think you will do a good job writing. Just as constructive criticism, I felt the intro was a little forced. Probably would have lost me if I didn't know you from here.


Yeah it was the first thing that I've actually written besides the huddle in over a year. It's going to take some time to get a nice prose form back.