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For those of you who like metal/heavy music - check out my band!


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#16 Bronn

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 08:05 PM

I can understand the lyrics, for the most part

If I had to nitpick anything, and don't take this wrong venom, is that the vox do seem a little forced at times, like he's about to be out of breath or something... Don't get me wrong, it is still good schitt!

It reminds me of Nothingface(especially the vox when they sung heavy)/Unearth/Wretched/some of the Sumerian stuff but you do a very good job of being original... I can tell the concept of the band comes through in the music (and I'm sure you have a lot to do with that)... also, the first and second breakdowns break my neck every time... lol

I've enjoyed keeping up with what you've been doing since you posted the first practice vids, sent me the demo tracks, and now this... keep up the great work, bro-ham!

#17 venom

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 09:47 PM

I can understand the lyrics, for the most part

If I had to nitpick anything, and don't take this wrong venom, is that the vox do seem a little forced at times, like he's about to be out of breath or something... Don't get me wrong, it is still good schitt!

It reminds me of Nothingface(especially the vox when they sung heavy)/Unearth/Wretched/some of the Sumerian stuff but you do a very good job of being original... I can tell the concept of the band comes through in the music (and I'm sure you have a lot to do with that)... also, the first and second breakdowns break my neck every time... lol

I've enjoyed keeping up with what you've been doing since you posted the first practice vids, sent me the demo tracks, and now this... keep up the great work, bro-ham!


Haha yea I do agree with the vocals seeming a bit forced at times. Our singer put me up to the task for writing lyrics and vocals patterns, which is a first ever for me...so needless to say its a work in progress, haha. I do appreciate the feedback...and all criticism is welcome, so dont sweat it...outside opinions I find to be very helpful towards the bettering of our material down the road.

Thank you so much for the kind words my man.

#18 Porn Shop Clerk

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Posted 13 August 2012 - 11:02 PM

needs more cowbell

#19 Harris Aballah

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 07:23 AM

We go by the name "Black Pope"

Enjoy!


I've got a satanic novel called" shadow of a mind" (son of a devil) published that you can find on line. It was originally written for a metal album for a band i was in years ago. My pen name is Doctor Animal, you should check it out. It's pure evil, I promise. Actually wrote the whole thing on lsd bout 12 years ago. keep jammin friend!

#20 MadHatter

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 09:02 AM

Haha yea I do agree with the vocals seeming a bit forced at times. Our singer put me up to the task for writing lyrics and vocals patterns, which is a first ever for me...so needless to say its a work in progress, haha. I do appreciate the feedback...and all criticism is welcome, so dont sweat it...outside opinions I find to be very helpful towards the bettering of our material down the road.

Thank you so much for the kind words my man.


So you wrote the lyrics and set the the lyric patterns yourself?

Damn impressive man...nice work.

#21 mmmbeans

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 09:06 AM

People who listen to metal understand the lyrics just fine. If you're more in to different genre's of music like pop, rap, country, etc. then you'll have a difficult time. Metal musicians don't gear their art towards the masses like those other genre's. They gear it towards what they enjoy playing; what speaks to them. There just happens to be millions of people out there who enjoy the same thing.



said every subculture ever.

#22 venom

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 09:19 AM

So you wrote the lyrics and set the the lyric patterns yourself?

Damn impressive man...nice work.


Sure did...thanks man :)

#23 MadHatter

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Posted 14 August 2012 - 09:21 PM

Sure did...thanks man :)



You definitely have some musical talent. I am envious. I have been booed off no less than 4 karaoke stages in my life. I have ZERO musical ability...though I am a huge music fan.