As to the grammar, you need to get it together because you are communicating with a written language. You aren't speaking to someone and unfortunately we have to understand what you're typing. Poor grammar is not only painful to read, it also makes it harder to get your point across.
You are using a medium of communication that requires proper written language, please keep that in mind.
That's true. I guess no one would take a poor written thread seriously. D: English is NOT my second language. Korean.