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2010 Carolina Panthers Trailer RE-DONE


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#21 bigdog_10_2002

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Posted 03 July 2010 - 12:45 PM

This was awesome. Thanks

Only suggestion I have would be to add some sound bites from players, such as smith, deangello, and beason.

During the pauses of the narrators speech

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Posted 03 July 2010 - 12:48 PM

decent job with the narration but it is a bit forced in a couple spots. there were also a few spots that it was really hard to make out because you got too soft and the words ran together. specifically after the 1:00 mark. 1:13-1:15 was really bad but the worst was right around the 1:35 mark. just try to enunciate a bit better and put a little more separation between the words.

just trying to help you improve.


This has been most helpful. Thanks for the feedback man.

#23 Lilsmitty09

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Posted 03 July 2010 - 01:21 PM

This was awesome. Thanks

Only suggestion I have would be to add some sound bites from players, such as smith, deangello, and beason.

During the pauses of the narrators speech


i actually will have some of those in the next video. thanks for suggestions man

#24 rayzor

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Posted 03 July 2010 - 02:01 PM

This has been most helpful. Thanks for the feedback man.

glad i could help. :)

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Posted 03 July 2010 - 06:27 PM

Damn fine job guys. Keep up the good work.

#26 Lilsmitty09

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Posted 12 August 2010 - 03:34 PM

just a bump to bring this back up for something to pump you up for tonight..