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#1 Floppin

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 10:36 PM

http://floppin.wordpress.com/

But mom, I wanna be a dancer!!!

Changes, big changes my friends.

#2 B wood

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 10:40 PM

meh

#3 Floppin

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 10:40 PM

Kinda how I feel about it. We'll see how I feel tomorrow.

#4 jasonluckydog

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 10:42 PM

I’m smart, not unattractive, reasonably athletic, literate, affluent, well mannered, well groomed.


That's when I quit reading..

#5 Floppin

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 10:43 PM

Probably smart.

#6 ARSEN

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Posted 18 June 2012 - 10:44 PM

You should add a lil background to it. Let me help you.

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You're welcome.

#7 NanuqoftheNorth

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 04:02 AM

Keep it up.

Worst case scenario you will have a great journal to pass on to the grandkids some day.

On the other hand it may reveal your true calling as a writer.

Who knows unless you try?

Good luck.

#8 Floppin

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 05:45 AM

Cleaned up a few errors and changed the last sentence since I only wrote it because I was tired and ready to stop.

#9 Scrumtrilescent

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 08:43 AM

Two, to, too!!!

#10 Hairless Cat

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 09:07 AM

want to be an author?

read some Tom Wolfe and get back to us.

#11 Mrs Pantherfan

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 09:07 AM

your legs are whiter than mine! :)

#12 Wither

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 08:40 PM

Next thing you know you will have the FBI at your door.







...again.

#13 d-run

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 09:24 PM

I thought it was good. I enjoy your posts on here and I think you will do a good job writing. Just as constructive criticism, I felt the intro was a little forced. Probably would have lost me if I didn't know you from here.

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Posted 19 June 2012 - 11:28 PM

best case scenario: people will actually read it

worst case scenario: this will be your last blog post

#15 Floppin

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Posted 20 June 2012 - 05:31 AM

I thought it was good. I enjoy your posts on here and I think you will do a good job writing. Just as constructive criticism, I felt the intro was a little forced. Probably would have lost me if I didn't know you from here.


Yeah it was the first thing that I've actually written besides the huddle in over a year. It's going to take some time to get a nice prose form back.


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