Need feedback on this video I made.

[Ivan The Awesome]

Hey guys, I recently acquired video editing software and I took a stab at it. It's mostly gameplay of me Playing Destiny Multiplayer. I apologize for the quality, but apparently my laptop can't handle 1080 or 720 rendering. It literally turns off before it finishes. I may need a new laptop but eh...I'll look for alternatives so I can render in HD. In the meantime watch the video and let me know what you think. Thanks in advance, any criticism is appreciated. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[CarolinaCoolin]

Destiny multiplayer is pure aids

[Ivan The Awesome]

O.O' Uh....thanks?

[frash.exe]

Oh god, 1080p rendering on a laptop? you're gonna need at least a high end desktop i5 processor for that kind of stuff

[KendrickPanther]

I actually have a gaming youtube where I post stuff for my friends to see and stuff. Yeah new laptop is not the answer. You need a desktop with a capture card and decent processor. You also need plenty of hard drive space. I have an i5-3570k processor and that is on the low end of what you would want. My videos are recorded at 50kb per second. a 5 minute video might be 1.8 gb on my hard drive.  

The vid looked nice though aside from the quality. I don't play games like that so it's hard for me to appreciate the skill involved in those maneuvers.