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2010 Carolina Panthers Trailer RE-DONE


Lilsmitty09

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How was the narration?
Personally, your voice is already epic, so don't try to make it sound more epic. This is a very emotional piece, so your voice needs to have emotion. In the part where you say "People are doubting us. Telling us what we cannot do. And we're sick of it." I would want to show a little anger there, like you're really sick of people doubting us. Also, don't pronounce your Ts so harshly.

Those are the only three things I would have done different. Don't over-emphasize, show emotion corresponding to your lines and the music, and be careful over-pronouncing Ts and Ps. Other than that, I really enjoyed your narration.

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decent job with the narration but it is a bit forced in a couple spots. there were also a few spots that it was really hard to make out because you got too soft and the words ran together. specifically after the 1:00 mark. 1:13-1:15 was really bad but the worst was right around the 1:35 mark. just try to enunciate a bit better and put a little more separation between the words.

just trying to help you improve.

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decent job with the narration but it is a bit forced in a couple spots. there were also a few spots that it was really hard to make out because you got too soft and the words ran together. specifically after the 1:00 mark. 1:13-1:15 was really bad but the worst was right around the 1:35 mark. just try to enunciate a bit better and put a little more separation between the words.

just trying to help you improve.

This has been most helpful. Thanks for the feedback man.

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This was awesome. Thanks

Only suggestion I have would be to add some sound bites from players, such as smith, deangello, and beason.

During the pauses of the narrators speech

i actually will have some of those in the next video. thanks for suggestions man

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