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TylerDurden

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Just wanted to share this... It was in a HuffPost article about a murder, which obviously is no laughing matter. But, this is one of the worst articles I've ever read, and many of the reader comments say the same.

This paragraph completely obfuscates the seriousness of the crime:

Allen Prue had plowed Jenkins' driveway and asked her out a couple of times, police said. She told a friend that she felt uncomfortable around him and later had him stop plowing, but that he showed up drunk at her home in autumn 2011 to ask whether he could plow the following year.

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Here is the rest of this poorly constructed article:

http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2012/03/29/melissa-jenkins-lured-by-allen-and-patricia-prue_n_1387536.html?ref=mostpopular

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