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Final Video I Made For My Entry Level Video Production Class!


Dex

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Feedback welcomed and enjoy. Also watch the entire video alternate ending after the credits. Still processing so image quality should improve over the next few minutes.

*available in HD*

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Having made a few of these things when I was younger....I think you did a good job for your first attempt. Criticisms:

1. You have to learn to be way more brutal in your editing. Sometimes long shots build suspense but you are not there yet.

2. Good job with the slow camera movements on the door knob, etc - but don't overdo these or the audience gets wise to it.

3. Need to establish better lighting - even though it's supposed to be night, everything looks just dim and washed out. You have a TV on so you can establish a light source from it in the bedroom - kitchen could have been a bit darker with contrast of the fridge light really illuminating. Audiences don't like a lot of dimmness to try and pick out what's up.

4. More closeups and cuts - the video goes stale when it's a bunch of establishing shots.

5. Writing - there's not a lot going on with the girl - is she frightened? Just sleepy? SHOW the audience what she is feeling.

Keep it up and keep sharing!

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Feedback welcomed and enjoy. Also watch the entire video alternate ending after the credits. Still processing so image quality should improve over the next few minutes.

*available in HD*

I liked it. Beautiful girl!

2 things. 1) You should have had her scratcher a$$ like a guys do when they are standing at the fridge. :lol: 2) I hate it when you have to listen to 5 minutes worth of music crap to leave a msg on someone's cell phone! (Frist time she did, the last 2 she didn't.)

Shoot! You are in Connecticut. I was going to see if you wanted to shoot a commercial this Summer.

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Needs nudity

Now how did I know that comment was coming? :lol:

Liked it overall. Kinda ambiguous ending. Has the feel of some of the Fewdio shorts ("Bedfellows", etc). I'd probably have had her stab her boyfriend at the door and only then realize it was a dream.

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